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They took Oliver out of his pen and put him in there car. 

• Change took to take
• Insert a comma after pen
• Change there to their
• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

Olivers ears stood up on his head. 

• Change Olivers to Oliver's
• Change on his head to they were on his head
• No change should be made.
• Change stood up to standed up

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CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.3.2D

Then he glansed again at his new friends and let out a contented sigh. 

• Delete he
• Change glansed to glanced
• Insert a comma after friends
• Sentence 41 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.2.2C

“I’m a clown fish,” a striped orange-and-white thing said with a giggle.”
 

• Change striped to stripped
• Change said to says
• Delete the quotation marks after the period.
• The sentence should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.5.2D

 Mom, Dad, and Lauren was upstairs.

• Delete the comma after Mom
• Change Dad to dad
• Change was to were
• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

I just think they get a little too much atention. 

• Change get to got
• Change too much to to much
• Change atention to attention
• Sentence should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.2.2C

My cat, on the other hand, is quite comfortable staying inside, and using her litter box.

• Change quite to quiet
• Delete the comma after inside
• Change and using to she uses
• Sentence 11 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

You won’t never see a cat tip over a trash can and shred its contents. 

• Change never to ever 
• Change and shred to they don’t shred
• Change contents to contints
• No change needs to be made.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2E

So the next time you hear someone listing the reasons that dogs are better than cats, remember that having a cat for a pet has it’s advantages.

• Change hear to heard
• Change reasons to reason’s
• delete the comma after cats
• Change it’s to its

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CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.3.2D

Its delicate stem became a woody trunk and its bare branches were soon filled with pointy pine needles.

• Insert a comma after trunk
• Change bare to bear
• Change filled to fill 
• no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2B