Writing Review

What change should be made to this sentence?
She stoped at her friend's house before racing home. 

• Change friend's to friends 
• Change stoped to stopped 
• Change racing to raceing 
• Make no change 

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

How could the writer combine these two sentences?
There were no more cookies in the jar.  He went to the store to purchase more. 

• There were no more cookies in the jar so he went to the store to purchase more. 
• There were no more cookies in the jar, and he went to the store to purchase more. 
• There were no more cookies in the jar, so he went to the store to purchase more. 
• No change is needed. 

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

Which transition word would best fit with sentence 3 below?
(1) I slowly walked toward the door. (2)  I turned the knob gently. 
(3) Out popped my baby brother! (4) My heart nearly beat out of my chest!

• Finally, 
• Next, 
• Suddenly, 
• Then, 

Tags

CCSS.RL.2.10

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

What change needs to be made to sentence 5?
(5) My dog loves to eat old bones and leftover food. 

• My dog loves to eat old bones, and leftover food.
• My dog loved to eat old bones, and leftover food.
• My dog’s love to eat old bones and leftover food.
• Make no change.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.1.1C

What change needs to be made to Sentence 21?
(21)  The alamo is famous land mark in San Antonio, TX. 

• Change alamo to Alamo 
• Change TX to tx
• Change San Antonio to san antonio
• Make no change 

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What change needs to be made to Sentence 15?
(15) Jay had to pick up pencils, crayons and markers for the first day of school. 

• Change school to School 
• Add comma before and 
• Add comma after and 
• Make no change 

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

The word "cool" doesn't fit quite right.  What word could replace cool?
(8)  We got on the roller coaster and it was so cool looking down at the tiny people below.  (9)  They looked like little ants. 

• good
• mesmerizing 
• fun 
• awesome 

Tags

CCSS.RF.2.3E

CCSS.RF.2.3F

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

What change should be made to sentence 19?
(19) Larrys cats were running wild!  (20)  He couldn't keep up with all of his cats! 

• Change cats to cat's 
• Change couldn't to could'nt 
• Change Larrys to Larry's 
• Make no change 

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

How can the writer revise to write a better conclusion? 
(26)  I love to draw! 

• Drawing always lifts my spirits and makes me feel complete.  I will always be an artist. 
• Drawing is super fun, and I love it so much. 
• You should draw! 
• Drawing is a fun activity everyone should try. 

Tags

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

What change should be made to sentence 4?
(4)  I carried my bucket to the whale. (5)  I filled the bucket with water. 

• Change carried to caried 
• Change whale to well 
• Change filled to filed 
• Make no change 

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.5.1C