Mock STAAR Writing Review

What is the BEST way to combine the sentences?

Chemicals used on her job made her asthma worse. She decided to live out another dream.

• Chemicals on her job made her asthma worse, she decided to live out another dream.

• Because chemicals on her job made her asthma worse, she decided to live out another dream.

• Chemicals on her job made her asthma worse, and decided to live out another dream.

• Chemicals used on her job made her asthma worse but she decided to live out another dream.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What is the best way to combine the sentences?

This amazing young woman has a special style. She blends reggae with rock and Japanese music.

• While this amazing young woman has a special style, and she blends reggae with rock and Japanese woman.

• This amazing young woman has a special style that blends reggae with rock and Japanese music.

• This amazing young woman has a special style, she blends reggae with rock and Japanese music.

• Even though this amazing woman has a special style, she blends reggae with rock and Japanese music.

Tags

CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What transition should be added in the blank?

My Mom said her favorite place to eat is Chili's.________ We're going today.

• For example,

• On the other hand,

• Otherwise,

• In fact,

Tags

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

What is the BEST revision?

The boy likes to read books, throw footballs and dances practice.

• The boy likes to read books. Throw footballs and practice dances.

• The boy likes to read books, throw footballs, and practice dances.

• The boy likes to read books and throw footballs and practice dances.

• The boy likes to read books, throw footballs, and dances.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Improve the clarity by changing it to:

We read it the whole weekend. Wonder is now one of my favorite books.

• Wonder

• weekend

• book

• magazines

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

What change needs to be made?

Teachers has even taught about using good manners in school.

• has even taught to has even teach

• has even taught to have even taught

• has even taught to even teaching

• No change needs to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.5.1B

What change needs to be made?

After deleviring the package to her mom, she went home to take a nap.

• Remove the comma after mom

• Change deleviring to delivering

• Change mom to Mom

• Change went to go

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change needs to be made?

What are your plans for the Summer?

• Change plans to plan

• Change ? to .

• Change Summer to summer

• No change needs to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What is the correct way to write the sentence?

However, quite a few cities, including Houston Austin Corpus Christi and Fort Worth they are in Texas.

• However, quite a few cities are in Texas. Including Houston, Austin, Corpus Christi and Fort Worth.

• However, quite a few cities, including Houston, Austin, Corpus Christi, and Fort Worth, are in Texas.

• However, quite a few cities, including Houston, Austin, Corpus Christi, and Fort Worth. They are in Texas.

• The sentence is written correctly

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2B

What change needs to be made?

And according to Zoey Sunday is the best day to create a to do list.

• Insert a comma after Zoey

• Change Sunday to sunday

• Change is to are

• No changes need to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A