Revise and Edit Review Unt 2

What change needs to be made in this sentence?

Ms. phelps likes to go to the gym after work.

• Change phelps to Phelps

• Change likes to like

• Change work to Work

• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1D

A more appropriate transition at the beginning of sentence 2 should be used. Which of the following should replace For example?

(1) Chocolate is my favorite treat. (2) For example, I eat as much of it as I can during the day.

• However,

• Therefore,

• In fact,

• Although,

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

What change should be made in this sentence?

Today is February 5 2016.

• Today is february 5 2016.

• Today is February 5. 2016.

• Today is February 5, 2016.

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.2.2B

CCSS.L.3.2B

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

What change should be made in this sentence?

Chloe gave Mrs neff an apple.

• Chloe gave Mrs. Neff an apple.

• Chloe gave Mrs. Neff an apple

• Chloe gave Mrs neff an apple.

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

What change should be made in this sentence?

I would love some vanilla chocolate, and strawberry ice cream.

• I would love some vanilla, chocolate and strawberry ice cream.

• I would love some vanilla, chocolate, and strawberry ice cream.

• I would love some vanilla chocolate, and strawberry ice cream?

• No change needed.

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CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

What change should be made in this sentence?

Please take us to the mall zoo and ice cream store.

• Please take us to the mall. Zoo and ice cream store.

• Please take us to the mall- zoo- and ice cream store.

• Please take us to the mall, zoo, and ice cream store.

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.11-12.2A

What is the correct way to write the sentences?

The audience cheered wildly. And rose to their feet to signal an encore.

• The audience cheered wildly. And rose to their

  feet to signal an encore.

• The audience cheered wildly And rose to their

  feet to signal an encore.

• The audience cheered wildly and rose to their

  feet to signal an encore.

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

9. What is the correct way to write the sentences?

(1) I was not going to get in the cold water. (2) And was even thinking about diving into the hot tub.

• And was even thinking. About diving into the hot tub.

• I was even thinking about diving, I would go into the hot tub.

• I was even thinking about diving into the hot tub.

• Sentence 2 is written correctly.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

17. What is the correct way to write the sentences?

(1) The clown brought in 50 balloons. (2) And even blew them up.

• And even I blew them up.

• And he even blew them up.

• He even blew them up.

• Sentence 2 is written correctly.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Which sentence does not belong in this paragraph?

(A)My dad took us to the circus. (B)The clowns drove around in this silly car.(C) The elephants did tricks. (D) The lady on the flying trapeze turned so many flips! (E) The popcorn was too salty.

• A

• B

• C

• D

• E