A Good Way to Earn Money

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change discussed to discuss

• Insert a comma after parents

• Change then to than

• Insert a comma after neighbors

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CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.2B

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change quickly to quicker

• Change found to find

• Change there to they're

• Change many, very to dozens of

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CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What revision, if any, is needed in sentences 7 and 8?

• Most of the people. My parents spoke with didn't have time to do all of their household chores or hard work.

• Most of the people my parents spoke with they didn't have time to do all of their household chores or yard work.

• Most of the people my parents spoke with didn't have time to do all of their household chores or yard work.

• No revision needed.

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CCSS.L.5.3A

CCSS.W.5.4

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 10 and 11?

• I mowed lawns, weeded gardens, painted fences, and took care of pets.

• I mowed lawns, weeded gardens, painted fences, took care of pets.

• I mowed lawns, weeded gardens, and painted fences w hile taking care of pets.

• Taking care of pets, I mowed lawns, weeded gardens, and painted fences.

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CCSS.L.5.3A

CCSS.W.5.2C

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 13 and 14?

• I wanted to accept every job and then later I only took on those I knew I had time for.

• I wanted to accept every job, I only took on those I knew I had time for.

• I wanted to accept every job also I only took on those I knew I had time for.

• I wanted to accept every job, but I only took on those I knew I had time for.

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CCSS.L.5.3A

CCSS.W.5.3C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 21?

• Change and to a comma

• Change treat to treet

• Change grows to grow

• Make no change.

What change should be made in sentence 22?

• Change Earning to Earn

• Insert a comma after fun

• Change is to was

• Change good to best

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CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D