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Which choice is written correctly ?

• Finally, when I had to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game is when I agreed. To give contact lenses a try.

• Finally, I had to repair my broken glasses, following a particularly rough basketball game, then I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

• Finally, after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game, I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

• Finally, after after having to repair my broken glasses following a particularly rough basketball game. I agreed to give contact lenses a try.

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Which choice is written correctly?

• I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep's.

• I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep's.

• I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creep's.

• I couldn't figure out why other people cared so much, and the thought of putting something into my eye gave me the creeps.

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• "I can get you into contacts," she insisted every time she saw me.

• "I can get you into contacts" she insisted every time she seen me.

• "I can get you into contacts" she insisted every time she saw mine.

• "I can get you into contacts" she insisted every time she saw me.

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• She said, "that once I got them in, I would be free to make my own decisions."

• She said that once I got them in, I would be free, to make my own decisions.

• She said that once I got them in, I would be free to make my own decision.

• She said that once I got it in, I would be free to make my own decision.

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• We were less then a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!"

• We were less then a mile away from a doctor's office when I anounced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!"

• We were less than a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing!"

• We were less then a mile away from a doctor's office when I announced, "Mom, I want to go back and learn how to put the lenses in myself. Contacts are amazing."

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• Returning to the optometrist's office, and within an hour I had took those contacts out and put them back in three times.

• We returned to the optometrist's office, and within a hour I had took those contacts out and put them back in three times.

• We returned to the optometrist's office and within an hour I had took these contacts out and put them back in three times.

• We returned to the optometrist's office, and within an hour I had taken those contacts out and put them back in three times.

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• Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds I love the freedom they give me.

• Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds, which loves the freedom they give me.

• Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds. Loving the freedom they give me.

• Now I pop my contacts in and out in seconds, and I love the freedom they give me.

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• Walk down crowded urban streets comes natural for most city dwellers.

• Walking down crowded urban streets came natural for most city dwellers.

• Walking down crowded urban streets comes naturally for most city dwellers.

• Walking down crowded urban streets comes natural for most city dwellers.

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• They usually move quickly expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.

• They usually move quickly, they expertly navigate the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.

• They usually move quickly, expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and make split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.

• They usually move quickly, expertly navigating the busy sidewalk and making split-second decisions about where to step and where not to.

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• Working into chalk on city sidewalks. He creates startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.

• Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates startling drawings they appear to be three-dimensional.

• Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates them. The startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.

• Working with chalk on city sidewalks, he creates startling drawings that appear to be three-dimensional.

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