Revise and Edit

(1) Mr. Oliver told the man he did not to be paid back. (2) As a result, he wanted the man to pay it forward in the future.

What change, if any, is needed?

• In other words

• For example

• To finish

• Instead

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

In 2007, at a drive-through coffee shop, customers set a record.

What is a more effective way to revise this sentence?

• In 2007 customers wand to set a record at a drive-through coffee shop.

• In 2007, the a drive-through coffee shop where they going to set.

• At a drive-through coffee shop

• In 2007 the customers at a drive-through coffee shop set a record.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

On February 17th we celebrate random acts of kindness. In Mrs. Oliver's class we are always kind. We know exactly what to do when someone is kind to us.

What can we add?

• Cool.

• Say cool.

• It's nice!

• Pay it forward!

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.K.1D

Over the summer my family took a vacation to Oklahoma city.

What change is needed?

• change took to had taken

• add a comma after vacation

• change city to City

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What could be a more perfect gift.

What change, if any, should be made.

• Delete more perfect and add perfectest

• Change gift to giftest

• Delete the period and add a question mark

• No change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

The Statue of Liberty measures 305 feet 1 inch from the ground to the tip of the flame but is as tall as a 22-story building.

What change, if any, should be made.

• change but to who

• change but to , and

• change but to or

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

The Statue of Liberty had 35 piece's.

What change, if any, should be made?

• The statue of liberty had 35 piece's.

• The Statue of liberty had 35 piece's.

• The Statue of Liberty had 35 pieces.

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

(1) She was also a present. (2) Meant for Ms. Ortega's accomplishment.

How would you combine both statements?

• Ms. Ortega had accomplishments and she received a present.

• Meant for Ms. Ortega's accomplishment, she was also a present.

• A present for her accomplishments.

• The statements are correct the way they are now.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

The american revolutionary war lasted for eight years.

What change, if any, is needed?

• The American revolutionary war lasted for eight years.

• The american Revolutionary war lasted for eight years.

• The American Revolutionary War lasted for eight years.

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Boys and girls, you are quiet the characters.

What change, if any, should be made?

• boys and Girl

• change quiet to quite

• change characters karacters

• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G