Revise and Edit 2

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?
First, if your going to cook, you need to pay attention to the ingredients.

• Change your to you’re
• Change attention to atention
• Change ingredients to ingredient’s
• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.4.1G

CCSS.L.4.3A

2 (1) The Titanic was the largest and most elegant passenger ship in 1912. (2) It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean. (3) It sank within three hours. What is the best way to combine sentences 2 and 3? 

•  It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean, it sank within three hours.
•  It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean. it sank within three hours
• It ran into an iceberg in the north Atlantic Ocean and sank within three hours. 

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CCSS.L.4.1F

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.W.4.3C

CCSS.W.4.4

(1) There were once thousands of peregrine falcons in the eastern United States. (2) People were using harmful pesticides. (3) Some pesticides are very useful. (4) Eventually, people stopped using harmful pesticides to help the falcons. Which sentence, if any, does not belong in the paragraph? 

• Sentence 2 
• Sentence 3
• Sentence4 

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CCSS.RI.4.1

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

(1) Polar bear cubs live with their mothers for three years. (2) When it is grown, the polar bear lives alone. (3) Most bears hibernate in the winter. (4) The adult polar bear spends most of its life hunting for food. Which sentence does not belong in the paragraph?  

• Sentence (1)
• Sentence (2)
• Sentence (3) 
• Sentence (4)

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CCSS.RI.4.1

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.4.5

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

The father helped his children get into they're pajamas.

• Change they're to their.
• Change father to Father
• Change they're to there
• Change helped to helping

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CCSS.L.4.1G

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's
• Insert a comma after After
• Insert a comma after shopping
• Insert a comma after store

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.6.6

Choose the best conjunction to join the sentence pair.
We can ask directions. We can use a map. 

• and
• but
• or
• because

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CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.3A

CCSS.L.5.6

Find the mistake in the sentence.  
The boy want to the park.  

• change boy to Boy
• change want to went 
• no change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.6.1E

CCSS.L.6.6

What a beautiful view (./?/!)

• .
• ?
• !

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CCSS.L.4.3B

(1) Tara had to much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Change the period to a question mark.

• Change had to has

• Change to to too

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.1G