Revising Sentences 1

Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?

• The new book was read by every student on the second shelf.

• On the second shelf, the new book was read by every student.

• The new book on the second shelf was read by every student.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?

• The cowboy was thrown by the bull with a leather vest.

• The cowboy with the leather vest was thrown by the bull.

• With a leather vest, the cowboy was thrown by a bull.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?

• With a flat tire, the turnpike had a car to be towed.

• The car with a flat tire was towed off the turnpike.

• The car was towed off the turnpike with a flat tire.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?

• Don't give the fish with small bones in it to the cat.

• Don't give the fish to the cat with its small bones.

• Don't give the fish to the cat with small bones in it.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence is expressed most clearly and effectively?

• He saw a bird that he didn't recognize sitting on a wire.

• He saw a bird sitting on a wire that he didn't recognize.

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.7.1A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

Diego Rivera created large, bold murals. His work revived Latin American fresco painting.

• Diego Rivera created Latin American fresco painting.
• Diego Rivera created large, bold murals and revived Latin American fresco painting.
• Diego Rivera created large, bold murals but revived Latin American fresco painting.
• Although he revived Latin American fresco painting, Diego Rivera created murals.

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CCSS.L.1.1C

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

Rivera studied painting in Europe between 1907 and 1921. He became friends with famous artists there.

• Rivera became friends with famous artists while studying painting in Europe between 1907 and 1921.
• Rivera became friends with famous artists between 1907 and 1921.
• Even though Rivera studied painting in Europe, he became friends with famous artists.
• Rivera studied famous artists in Europe between 1907 and 1921.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

The bold colors used by some European painters influenced him, but Rivera did not develop his own style of painting until he returned to Mexico from Europe.

• Although the bold colors used by some European painters influenced him, Rivera did not develop his own style of painting until he returned to Mexico from Europe.
• The bold colors used by some European painters influenced him, but Rivera did not develop his own style until he returned to Mexico.
• The bold colors used by some European painters influenced Rivera, but he did not develop his own style of painting until he returned to Mexico.
• Rivera was influenced by European painters and did not develop his own style until he returned to Mexico.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

Rivera wanted to create a new art based on national themes. David Alfaro Siqueiros, another Mexican artist, also wanted to create a new art based on national themes.

• Rivera wanted to create a new art based on national themes, as did David Alfaro Siqueiros, another Mexican artist.
• Just like Rivera, David Alfaro Siqueiros wanted to create a new art based on national themes.
• Rivera and David Alfaro Siqueiros, another Mexican artist, both wanted to create a new art based on national themes.
• Rivera wanted to create a new Mexican art.

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CCSS.L.1.1C

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

Rivera believed that art should be available to all people. He began painting murals on public buildings

• Rivera believed that art should be available to all people, but he began painting murals on public buildings.
• Although Rivera believed that art should be available to all people, he began painting murals on public buildings.
• Rivera believed that art should be available to all people, so he began painting murals on public buildings.
• Rivera believed that art should be available to all people, yet he began painting murals on public buildings.

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E