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What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

(2) Zoey the sea turtle lumbered forward, not quiet used to the heavy weight of her shell out of the water.

• Change lumbered to lumbering

• Change quiet to quite

• Change not to she was not

• No change needs to be made in sentence 2.

What change should be made in sentence 6?

(6) As Zoey draged herself up the shore and away from the ocean, she felt the dry and grainy sand on her flippers.

• Delete As

• Change draged to dragged

• Change felt to feeled

• Insert a comma after dry

How should sentence 11 be changed?

(11) On a warm night a lot like this one, she had poked her foot out of an egg and then pushed the rest of her body threw the shell onto the sand.

• Change poked to pokked

• Change an egg to a egg

• Change threw to through

• Sentence 11 should not be changed.

What change should be made in sentence 18?

(18) Zoey spent the next sevaral years far out in the ocean waters. (

• Change sevaral to several

• Change far to she was far

• Change waters to water’s

• Change the period to a comma

What change needs to be made in sentence 24?

(24) Zoey found a dry spot on the beach and began her work.

• Change found to finds

• Change began to begun

• Change her work to their work

• No change needs to be made in this sentence.

What is the correct way to write sentence 29?

(29) Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound, then the waves carried her away again.

• Zoey taking one last look at the sandy mound. Then the waves carried her away again.

• Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound. Before the waves carried her away again.

• Zoey taking one last look at the sandy mound, and then the waves carrying her away again.

• Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound before the waves carried her away again.

6What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

(5)They took Oliver out of his pen and put him in there car.

• Change took to take

• Insert a comma after pen

• Change there to their

• No change should be made.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 20?

(20)Olivers ears stood up on his head.

• Change Olivers to Oliver’s

• Change on his head to they were on his headJ

• No change should be made.

• Change stood upt o standed

9How should sentence 30 be changed?

(30)“I’m a clown fish,” a striped orange-and-white thing said with a giggle.”

• Change striped to stripped

• Change said to says

• Delete the quotation marks after the period

• The sentence should not be changed.

12How should sentence 45 be changed?

(45)Mom, Dad, and Lauren was upstairs.

• Delete the comma after Mom

• Change Dad to dad

• No change should be made.

• Change was to were