Revising and Editing #2

"Who wants to dig in the dirt when you can just go to the grocery store? I grumbled to myself.

• Change the question mark to a period

• Insert quotation marks after the question mark

• Change myself to himself

• Make no change

My Dad chose tomatoes and cucumbers.

• Change Dad to dad

• Change chose to choose

• Change the period to a question mark

• Make no change

Dad did most of the hard work by getting the ground ready, but I helped sew our seeds.

• Change most to mostly

• Change getting to geting

• Change sew to sow

• Make no change

Nick Allen is known for finding ways to waist time in class.

• Change known to nown

• Change ways to weighs

• Change waist to waste

• Make no change

When that doesn't work, the Principal visits Nick's house.

• Change doesn't to doesnt

• Change Principal to principal

• Change Nick's to Nicks

• Make no change

Business's even start selling pens called frindles.

• Change Business's to Businesses

• Change even to hardly

• Change start to starting

• Make no change

Dodger's manners were perfectly.

• Insert his after Dodger's

• Change perfectly to perfect

• Change the period to a comma

• Make no change

Mom and Dad packed a picnic for we to eat after the show was over.

• Change Dad to dad

• Change we to us

• Change eat to ate

• Make no change

At that moment, I decided that I would start training Dodger with a plane white ball.

• Change decided to deciding

• Change would to could

• Change plane to plain

• Make no change

I was disappointed when my mom told me we would spend our vacasion at my cousin's house again.

• Change spend to spending

• Change vacasion to vacation

• Change cousin's to cousins

• Make no change