Revising & Editing #1

• Therefore

• Soon

• In conclusion

• For example

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

• Finishing cookies, you should be sure to get a cold glass of milk.

• We finished eating cookies. Then, we had a cold glass of milk.

• Before you open a box of cookies, be sure to get a cold glass of milk.

• We finished a box of cookies it was good to have a cold glass of milk with it.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

• Change Autumn to autumn

• Change have sprouted to sprouting

• Insert a comma after sprouted

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1B

• Delete the comma after ball

• Change their to his

• Change through to threw

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.5.1C

• Change went to gone

• Insert a comma after weekend

• Change friend's to friends

• Replace learnt with learned

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.3.1D

• Change brung to brought

• Change birthday to birth day

• Delete the comma after party

• Capitalize birthday party

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

• The player ran after the soccer ball. The crowd screaming and cheering loudly.

• The player ran after the soccer ball, and the crowd screamed, they cheered loudly.

• The player ran after the soccer ball, and the crowd screamed. Cheering loudly.

• The player ran after the soccer ball. The crowd screamed and cheered loudly.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

• While the class went to the library, Julian was left eating in the cafeteria alone.

• The people went to the library, and Julian was left. To eat in the cafeteria alone.

• The class went to the library, Julian was left eating in the cafeteria alone.

• None of these sentences are correctly written.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

• Delete the comma after Tiffant

• Change Dad to dad

• Change was to were

• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

• Change anything to nothing

• Delete the comma after football

• Change don't to doesn't

• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A