2016 My Prized Possession Editing

These shoes have become more then just footwear to me.

• Change have become to has become

• Change then to than

• Change to me to too me

• Sentence does not need to be changed

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1G

There were hard times, like when we climmed the backyard tree and fell.

• Change were to was

• Change climmed to climbed

• Change fell to falled

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.RL.2.10

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, they were sturdy. What is the correct way to write this sentence?

• For the fourth-grade class hike, there was a lot of kids they wore new hiking shoes that were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike. A lot of kids wore new hiking shoes, and they were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore new hiking shoes. That were sturdy.

• For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore sturdy, new hiking shoes.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

I thought about skipping the Event altogether.

• Change I thought to Thought

• Change skipping to skiping

• Change Event to event

• Make no change

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CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.2.4

Like a true friend, it encouraged me.

• Change it to they

• Change me to us

• Change the period to a comma

• Sentence 23 does not need to be changed

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

Ive already reserved a spot on my shelf where red tennis shoes can retire.

• Change Ive to I´ve

• Change already to alreddy

• Change where to were

• No change should be made

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A