Descriptive vs. Evaluative Feedback

Descriptive or Evaluative: This was an amazing paper!

• Descriptive

• Evaluative

Descriptive of Evaluative: Each of the titles made me curious and interested to know more.

• Descriptive

• Evaluative

Descriptive or Evaluative: The first entry contains really interesting information, like the results from studies conducted at Harvard.

• Descriptive

• Evaluative

Tags

CCSS.RI.9-10.8

Choose the statement that gives the best descriptive feedback.

• Your six topics were unique, so the paper kept my attention.

• Your six topics were cool, so that was fun to read.

• Your six topics were good, so good job.

• Your six topics were good choices; so . . . yeah.

Choose the statement that gives the best descriptive feedback.

• Good research!

• The research enhanced what you already knew, making you seem very credible.

• The research you located in the databases was pertinent to the subject matter and tremendously supported the previously stated content in wholesome and uplifting ways.

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CCSS.W.9-10.7

CCSS.W.9-10.8

Choose the statement that gives the best descriptive feedback.

• Your style of writing was conversational and interesting.

• Good writing style!

• Awesome writing style! I would give you an A++.

What is wrong with giving this statement as feedback to your peers? (You may select more than one response)

"Overall, good. I give it a 7/10."

• The statement is not descriptive.

• The statement is not very positive.

• The statement does not tell the author what is good.

• The statement does not show any evidence of actually reading the paper.

Tags

CCSS.RI.9-10.8

CCSS.RI.9-10.1

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RL.9-10.1

CCSS.W.9-10.1B

CCSS.W.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

CCSS.W.9-10.9

Which of the following feedback statements are descriptive? (You could select more than one)

• You have great titles!

• The titles are creative! I like how all of them pertain to slogans.

• Good idea to make puns for each of the titles!

• I really, sincerely appreciate each and every one of your titles.

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CCSS.SL.9-10.4

Which of the following statements would be MOST helpful feedback?

• This was interesting.

• The part about balancing chlorine and pH was interesting.

• The part about balancing chlorine and pH levels was fascinating because I had no idea pool chemicals were so complex.

• The part about balancing chlorine and PH levels was fascinating because you did a great job of making a complicated process easy to understand.

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CCSS.SL.9-10.4

CCSS.SL.9-10.1

Select the statement(s) that give descriptive feedback.

• English 9 Honors students are super cool.

• English 9 Honors students are giving tremendous effort in their online work, as several teachers across curriculum areas have commented how impressed they have been with these students!

• English 9 Honors students are successful.

• English 9 Honors students are setting themselves up for future success by demonstrating time management, written communication skills, and advocacy skills.