Revise and Edit

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus
• change everywhere to every  where
• change dessert to desert
• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• add a comma before and 
• change helpfull to helpful
• insert a comma after difficult
• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I
• change lots to lot's
• change there to their
• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above? 

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 
• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 
• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 
• No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

"We've got to go quickly, said his mother.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change we've to we'll
• change quickly to quick
• insert quotation marks after quickly
• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

(1) The students visited Angelo State University and toured the observatory. (2) They had a wonderful time!
I want to add more detail after sentence 1. Which sentence could BEST follow sentence 1?

• The students went on a field trip.
• All of the kids got to ride on the school bus to the university. 
• An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope. 
• The telescope was huge!

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RL.5.1

CCSS.RL.5.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence?

• Timothy turned his homework in late.
• He ran quickly.
• However, she was.
• The bird perched on the power line. 

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

The lite from the morning sunrise was absolutely beautiful. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change sunrise to sun  rise 
• change beautiful to beautifull
• change lite to light 
• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change the to The
• change quite to quiet
• change grandmother to Grandmother
• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

Michael used colored pencils for the art project. Liam used paints for the art project. 

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project, and Liam used paints.
• Michael used colored pencils for the art project, Liam used paints for the project.
• Michael used colored pencils for the art project and Liam used paints. 
• Michael used colored pencils for the art project then Liam used paints for the art project.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E