Sentence Revision

What is the correct way to rewrite this sentence?
Yes, I'm Tyson's little brother, but that's only part of my identity, I'm a cool guy in my own way, too.

• Yes, I'm Tyson's little brother, that's only part of my identity, though, I'm a cool guy in my own way, too.
• Yes, I'm Tyson's little brother, but that's only part of my identity. Because I'm a cool guy in my own way, too.
• Yes, I'm Tyson's little brother, but that's only part of my identity. I'm a cool guy in my own way, too.
• It's correct as it is

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

How should the following sentence be changed?
I admired her ability to pick up a split, but I also appreciated her advise.

• change admired to admirred
• change the comma to a semicolon
• make no change
• change advise to advice

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

CCSS.L.9-10.2C

What is the correct way to write the following sentence?
It turned out this lady with the pink bowling bag was Bessie Richards, she was a recording artist of the 1960s.

• It turned out this lady with the pink bowling bag was Bessie Richards. Who was a recording artist of the 1960s.
• It turned out this lady with the pink bowling bag. She was Bessie Richards, a recording artist of the 1960s.
• It turned out this lady with the pink bowling bag was Bessie Richards. A recording artist of the 1960s.
• It turned out this lady with the pink bowling bag was Bessie Richards, a recording artist of the 1960s.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

It was really cold last week ___ however, it's been in the 60's the last few days.

• Semicolon

• Colon

• Comma

• Period

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• Jake, my black and white cat, loves to sleep on the couch next to me.

• Jake my black and white cat, loves to sleep on the couch next to me.

• Jake my black, and white cat, loves to sleep on the couch next to me.

• Jake, my black and white cat loves to sleep on the couch next to me.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• Amanda can you please bring me the pencil sharpener, and a piece of paper?

• Amanda, can you please bring me the pencil sharpener and a piece of paper?

• Amanda, can you please bring me the pencil sharpener, and a piece of paper?

• Amanda can you please bring me the, pencil, sharpener and a piece of paper?

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• Jim is very bold and smart but he doesn't always say nice things to people.

• Jim is very bold and smart, but he doesn't always say nice things to people.

• Jim, is very bold and smart but he doesn't always say nice things to people.

• Jim is very bold, and smart, but he doesn't always say nice things to people.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

Which sentence is correct?

• On her way to school, Marissa found a green woman's purse.
• On her way to school, Marissa found a woman's green purse.
• A green woman's purse was found by Marissa on her way to school.
• Marissa, on her way to school, was found by a woman's green purse.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

Which is the best way to write the sentence?

• Before I rewound the tape. We returned it to the store.

• I rewound the tape, before we returned it to the store.

• Before we returned it to the store; I rewound the tape.

• Before we returned it to the store, I rewound the tape.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

Choose the best conjunction to combine this sentence pair. We can ask directions. We can use a map.

• and

• but

• or

• because

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.3