Smiley Face Tricks

The ball slowly came towards me. I squinted my eyes at the bright sun. I was more than ready for this moment. I gripped as hard as I could and then swung. I heard the crack first and then the shouting. "Homerun!"

• Magic 3

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• Hyperbole

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Halloween is full of those I-can't-believe-that-just-happened moments.

• Magic 3
• Repetition for Effect
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This winter is as cold as a the north end of a tomb!

• Specific Detail

• Simile

• Personification

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I'm so hungry I could eat a horse!

• Hyphenated Modifier

• Hyperbole

• Personification

• Magic Three

The broccoli stared up at me from the center of the dinner table, taunting me to eat it.

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• metaphor

• Personification

• Magic three

Our teachers gave us a ton of homework over the four day break.

• Specific Detail

• Magic 3

• Simile

• Hyperbole

I love snow days, building massive snow forts, and drinking delicious hot cocoa in the winter.

• Magic 3

• Repetition for Effect

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• Hyphenated Modifier

In the winter, the world feels quieter. In the winter, the sky is a bright white. In the winter, I feel happier.

• Magic 4

• Repetition for Effect

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• Hyphenated Modifier

As I scrape the last of the snow off of our driveway, I take a moment to enjoy the intense amount of work I just shoveled. Then I groan while the snow gently drifts to the driveway all over again.

• Magic 5

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I woke with a please-let-it-be-a-snow-day feeling.

• Magic 6
• Repetition for Effect
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• Hyphenated Modifier