Revise & Edit

How should sentence 3 and 4 be written?

• As this music, spread across Texas, later a subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas.

• As this music spread across Texas, a subgenre of the blues appeared.

• As this music spread; a subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas.

• A subgenre of the blues appeared in Texas as music spread across Texas.

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CCSS.W.9-10.4

How should sentences 7 and 8 be combined?

• Johnson made it popular, so he inspired other performers.

• Johnson made it popular, because he inspired other performers.

• Johnson, made it popular, when he inspired other performers.

• Johnson made it popular, and he inspired other performers.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

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CCSS.L.9-10.3

What change should be made to sentence 13?

• Insert and before it

• Insert but before it

• Insert or before it

• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

What change should be made to sentence 14?

• Delete the comma after 1970s

• Insert a comma after music

• Insert a comma after again

• Insert a comma after country

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CCSS.L.9-10.2

What is the correct way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

• Everyone tells you not to act like a child, which that might be bad advice.

• Everyone tells you not to act like a child, but that might be bad advice.

• Everyone tells you, but not to act like a child because that might be bad advice.

• Everyone tells you not to act. Like a child, that might be bad advice.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

What change should be made to sentence 3?

• Insert a comma after children's

• Insert a comma after nap

• Insert a comma after coloring

• Delete the comma after activities

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

What change should be made to sentence 7?

• Insert commas after worrying and instead

• Insert a comma after instead

• Insert a semicolon after something

• Insert commas after that and people

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CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

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How should sentences 6 and 7 be written?

• Another story claims that the players, based on football, had to make their own uniforms that made them look like hippos.

• Another story claims that the players had to make their own uniforms that made them look like hippos, also based on football.

• Another football team story claims that the players had to make their own uniforms, and they wound up looking like hippos.

• This story is based on football and claims that the players had to make their own uniforms that made them look like hippos.

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CCSS.W.9-10.4

Select the FRAGMENT sentence.

• How was your weekend?

• I hope you had a great day!

• Have you turned in all your missing assignments?

• Although I like working.

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Select the SIMPLE sentence.

• How are?

• I love pizza.

• Do you like Wingstop or do you like Buffalo Wild Wings?

• Although I like to walk, I don't go outside when the temperature is over 100 degrees.

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CCSS.L.9-10.1