Revising and Editing Review Quiz

(1) Tara had too much cake last night. (2) She is sick to her stomach this morning.

How could you combine sentences 1 and 2?

• Tara had too much cake. Last night she is sick to her stomach this morning.

• Sick to her stomach this morning, Tara had too much cake.

• Tara had too much cake last night, she is sick this morning.

• Tara had too much cake last night, so she is sick to her stomach this morning.

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CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change Jenny and Haley to Them

• Change there to their

• Change dogs to dog’s

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

(9) I don’t agree with all these sentaments.

What change should be made in sentence 9?

• Change I to And

• Insert a comma after agree

• Change sentaments to sentiments

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.2.2C

(5) Jenny and Haley walked there dogs together for two hours. (6) The dogs slept very well that night.

What transition could be added to the beginning of sentence 6 to make it clearer?

• However,

• Therefore,

• In order to,

• Finally,

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheered wildly.

What is the best transition to add in front of sentence 10?

• As a result,

• However,

• For example,

• In addition,

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CCSS.RI.7.7

CCSS.RI.8.7

CCSS.RL.6.7

CCSS.RL.7.7

CCSS.RL.8.7

(9) Annie sang a beautiful high note. (10) The crowd cheering wildly.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

• Add a comma after cheering

• Change cheering to cheered

• Change the period to a question mark

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the best way to join these two sentences?
Because of the rain today. Soccer practice is cancelled.

• Because of the rain today soccer practice is cancelled. 
• Because of the rain today, soccer practice is cancelled. 
• Because of the rain today and soccer practice is cancelled.
• Because of the rain today, therefore soccer practice is cancelled today. 

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made?

Grandma and I are bakeing cookies for the carnival.

• Change bakeing to baking

• Change I to me

• Change cookies to cookie's

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

3.) However some decisions require careful thought because they could have lasting consequences.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 3?

• Change decisions to desisions

• Insert a comma after However

• Change they to we

• No change needs to be made in sentence 3.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

5.) It all began when my best friend's family invited me to go with them on a short vacation to galveston.

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 5?

• Change galveston to Galveston

• Change them to us

• Insert a comma after began

• No change needs to be made in sentence 5.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A