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Obesity is a problem in most countries in the world (include) Malaysia.

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In simple term obesity (was) being overweight to the point of endangering one's health.

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It is worrying to (saw) many people, especially primary school children, become obese.

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People (which) are obese are exposed to ailments like diabetes and high blood pressure.

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Uncontrolled eating of (sugar), carbohydrate-rich and fatty food is the main cause of obesity.

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Many Malaysian students nowadays are weak (on) English.

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Children spend too much time (watch) television, playing video games, and chatting on (an) Internet.

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There are (much) good bookshops as well as public libraries.

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Children can also (exchanged) books.

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We should encourage children to read (and) that we can improve the level on English (proficient) in Malaysia.

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