Faulty Coordination

John dusted the furniture, and I vacuumed the carpet.

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Mr. Green is the CEO of the company, and he is a native of Arkansas.

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Running takes discipline, and many people enjoy running.

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I completed the test and it is hard.

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Tammy walked on her sprained ankle and the ankle started to swell again.

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Rewrite into a proper sentence:

The car is dented and it has room for six.

• The car has room for six, which is dented.

• The car is dented. It has room for six.

• The car is dented and it was for six rooms.

I slowly climbed to the lookout point and reaching the top provided me with a spectacular view.

• I slowly climbed to the lookout point, which provided me with a spectacular view after reaching the top.

• I slowly climbed to the lookout point, but it provided me with a spectacular view after reaching the top.

• I slowly climbed to the lookout point. They provided me with a spectacular view after reaching the top.

Evan has a new wool pullover and he plans to wear it to the beach where the wind can turn very cold.

• He, evan has a new wool pullover, plans to wear it to the beach where the wind can turn very cold.

• Evan has a new wool pullover and to wear it to the beach where the wind can turn very cold.

• Evan has a new wool pullover. He plans to wear it to the beach where the wind can turn very cold.

Jacob is a foster child and has to go to the dentist often.

• Jacob is a foster child whose real parents neglected his teeth; consequently, he has to go to the dentist often.

• Jacob is a foster child. Has to go to the dentist often.

• Jacob, a foster child and has to go to the dentist often.