
ELAR Editing, Revision and Writing QUIZ
Authored by Constemecka Russell
English
7th Grade
CCSS covered
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1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
Which of the following should replace sentence 4 to effectively state the controlling idea of this paper?
There are professionals known as Foley artists, and they got their name from Jack Foley, who was the first Foley artist
Many of the sound effects that movie audiences hear are made by Foley artists, film industry professionals whose work is done after the filming of a movie is complete.
The sounds that you and I hear when we go to see a movie were not always made when the movie was being recorded.
Professionals create the things that are in the background in movies, including galloping horses, pelting rain, and chirping crickets.
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CCSS.RI.6.2
CCSS.RI.7.2
CCSS.RL.6.2
CCSS.RL.7.2
CCSS.RL.8.2
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 6 and 7?
Background noises and sound effects cannot be adequately recorded during filming these, including such things as roaring cars, galloping horses, or the gentle tapping of pencils on desks.
Background noises and sound effects cannot be adequately recorded during filming when they include such things as roaring cars, galloping horses, or the gentle tapping of pencils on desks.
Background noises and sound effects, such as roaring cars, galloping horses, or the gentle tapping of pencils on desks, cannot be adequately recorded during filming
Background noises and sound effects cannot be adequately recorded because such things as these roaring cars, galloping horses, or the gentle tapping of pencils on desks are included during filming.
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CCSS.RI.6.3
CCSS.RI.6.5
CCSS.RI.7.3
CCSS.RI.7.5
CCSS.RI.8.3
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 15?
Soon Foley was working to make films more realistic as he was improving the background sound with moviemakers.
Soon Foley was working with moviemakers to make more realistic films by improving the background sounds.
Soon Foley was working to improve the background sound with moviemakers and to make films more realistic.
Soon Foley was working to make more realistic films by improving the moviemakers and background sounds.
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CCSS.RI.6.3
CCSS.RI.6.5
CCSS.RI.7.3
CCSS.RI.7.5
CCSS.RI.8.5
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
What is the most effective transition to add to the beginning of sentence 19?
Fortunately
Finally
As a result
In addition
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CCSS.RI.6.7
CCSS.RI.7.7
CCSS.RI.8.7
CCSS.RL.6.7
CCSS.RL.7.7
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
What change needs to be made in sentence 6?
Change Although the idea to The idea
Insert a comma after intriguing
Change something to nothing
No change needs to be made in sentence 6.
Tags
CCSS.L.4.2C
CCSS.L.6.2A
6.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
How should sentence 9 be changed?
Change were to was
Change the comma to a semicolon
Insert a comma after people
Change supply’s to supplies
Tags
CCSS.L.1.1B
CCSS.L.2.2C
CCSS.L.3.2D
7.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
3 mins • 1 pt
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 11?
Change is to was
Change simply to simpley
Change to far to too far
No change should be made in this sentence.
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