Revising Writing for Clarity

Many Filipinos became health (conscious, concious) because of the pandemic.

• conscious

• concious

COVID-19 cases continue to (rice, rise) as days go by.

• rice

• rise

In March 2020, all barangay officials (received, recieved) an order to monitor the proper wearing of facemask and face shield.

• received

• recieved

Some (religous, religious) groups decided to continue the Sunday worship.

• religous

• religious

The (committee, commitee) agreed to conduct contact tracing.

• committee

• commitee

Pandemic caused fear (a)   many Filipino people and broke their heart.

A year has passed, yet people still worry about the virus that can anytime infect (a)   body system.

However, the strong family ties that this race has, helped them recover and go on_

(a)  

Positive thinking (a)   their natural cheerfulness contributed to their healing.

The virus is still there, (a)   each of them chose to continue their lives and make a living following the minimum health standards given by the Inter-Agency Task Force (IATF).