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He is such a bad driver. Smashing cars while parking.

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I am usually very tired after an exam, I think I need a break.

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We visited the pet shop in the mall.

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Making his cage quite comfortable.

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Many sites on the World Wide Web focus on school subjects, news, and hobbies, these sites can be useful sources of information.

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Albert Einstein was one of the greatest thinkers of the twentieth century; he changed the way people view the universe.

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Because the batteries in the flashlight were dead.

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The scientists planned to use the Web to share research with scientists in other parts of the world the new invention soon interested businesses and government organizations.

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A diet of mostly fruit, vegetables, and grain.

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People constantly search for faster ways to communicate, the Internet is one tool that helps people share information quickly.

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