Writing Discussion

Point

.......................overpopulation causes social issues, especially in major cities worldwide – where they are densely populated.

• For example

• Many people believe that

• Because

• Therefore

(explaination)

............... massive number of people in big cities will make those areas become densely populated and raise problem of chronic shortage of housing

• For example

• We all know that

• It is clear that

• To clarify it

Evidence

.......... in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam which has high population density also has very high rates of petty crimes, blockbusters and social evils compared to other areas

• So

• For instance

• Moreover

• For example

Link

.............. overpopulated nations facing many demerits of community.

• I think

• Many argued that

• Therefore

• Secondly

What type of this sentence:

To elaborate it, academic qualifications are required in many professions.

• Explaination

• Evidence

• Point

• Link

What type of this sentence:

So, young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.

• Example

• Link

• Point

• Explaination

Give idea to support two sides of this

Idea 1:

Better to educate boys and girls in separate schools

(Eg:

1. Boy and girl have different way of education.....

so ......)

Idea to support this statement:

Boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.

Outline body 1 based on PEEL:

better to educate boys and girls in separate schools

Outline body 2 based on PEEL:

boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.