English III revising and editing

Select TWO answer choices: A hook should be...

• interesting or wise

• a yes or no question

• driving your reader in to the topic of your paper

• An "have you ever imagined" question.

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CCSS.W.11-12.2

Select TWO answer choices: A hook should be...

• interesting or wise

• a yes or no question

• driving your reader in to the topic of your paper

• An "have you ever imagined" question.

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CCSS.W.11-12.2A

Which answer shows the correct way to write the sentence?

• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the the surface. And have a big mess to clean up.
• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface then we would have a big mess to clean up.
• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, and we would have a big mess to clean up.
• Otherwise, the pancakes would stick to the surface, we would have a big mess to clean up then.

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2

CCSS.W.11-12.5

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

After a few more questions and a breif pause, the quiz continued.

• Change few to fewer
• Change breif to brief
• Change the , to a ;
• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2

CCSS.W.11-12.5

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

When I opened my present I let out a yell.

• Delete When
• Change I to we
• Change I let out to and yell out
• Insert a comma after present.

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2

CCSS.W.11-12.4

CCSS.W.11-12.5

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

"It's to bad you were late to class," he said, "because I brought candy."

• Change It's to Its
• Change to to too
• Change he to He
• Change because to Because

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2

CCSS.L.11-12.5

CCSS.W.11-12.5

What is the best change we can make to this sentence: 

After I went to the store I went shoe shopping with my friends.

• Change friends to friend's
• Insert a comma after After
• Insert a comma after shopping
• Insert a comma after store

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

• We went to their house because there hosting a party.
• They're having a party at there house this weekend.
• We went to their house because they're hosting a party.
• There having a party at their house this weekend.

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2

He was learning how to solve equations. He found a trick that would make it easier.
 
What is the most effective way to combine the 2 sentences? 

• While learning how to solve equations, he found a trick that would make it easier.
• He was learning how to solve equations because he found a trick that would make it easier.
• While learning how to solve equations, a trick that he figured out made it easier.
• He was learning to solves the equations, then, he found a trick that would make it easier. 

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.W.11-12.1C

CCSS.W.11-12.2

CCSS.W.11-12.4

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

• We went to their house because there hosting a party.
• They're having a party at there house this weekend.
• We went to their house because they're hosting a party.
• There having a party at their house this weekend.

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CCSS.L.11-12.1

CCSS.L.11-12.2