Editing and revising 1

what change, if any, should be made to sentence 28?

• change me to I

• change Now to now

• change meddle to medal

• make no change.

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CCSS.L.2.2C

what change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?

• change kneeled to knelt

• add a comma after position.

• change signal to Signal

• make no change

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

what change, if any, should be made in sentence 22?

• Delete the comma after Sara.

• Change you to You

• Change cant to can't

• Make no change.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

what is the BEST way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

• I leaned forward and touched my fingers to the ground and I stretched my legs.

• I leaned forward, touched my fingers to the ground, and stretched my legs.

• I leaned forward, however, and touching my fingers to the ground, I stretched my legs.

• I leaned forward, touching my fingers to the ground, and I stretched my legs.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

The meaning of sentence 18 can be improved by changing He to...

• I

• My coach

• The runner

• The track

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

Which of the following is the BEST way to rewrite sentence 3 to make it more vivid?

• I tried to calm my stomach down by taking deep breaths

• I tried to calm the fluttering butterflies in my stomach by taking deep breaths

• I tried to calm the butterflies, in my stomach, by taking breaths.

• Deep breaths were taken so I could calm down in my stomach

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CCSS.RI.5.4

CCSS.RI.6.4

CCSS.RL.4.4

CCSS.RL.5.4

CCSS.RL.6.4

Which of the following is the BEST way to rewrite sentence 12 to make it more detailed?

• The finish line seemed far away. The runner in the lane next to mine broke through the ribbon.

• The finish line seemed far away when the runner in the next lane ran through the ribbon.

• The finish line seemed far away; then suddenly, the runner in the lane next to mine broke through the ribbon.

• The finish line was far away and a runner broke through the ribbon.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change, if any, should be made to the title?

• the track meet

• The track meat

• The Trak Meet

• No change needed

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

In line 28, grinned probably means...

• laughed at

• smiled

• got mad at

• slapped

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.1.1E

CCSS.L.K.1B

This passage is written in which point of view

• Second Person

• Third Person Limited

• First Person

• Third Person Omniscient

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CCSS.RL.1.6

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.6.6

CCSS.RL.7.6

CCSS.RL.8.6