Revise & Edit Review Part 1

What is the BEST way to combine sentences? I really need to go to the gym. I am too sick to drive.

• I really need to go to the gym, but I am too sick to drive.

• I really need to go to the gym, and I am too sick to drive.

• I really need to go to the gym, that I am too sick to drive.

• I really need to go to the gym, I am too sick to drive.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence? I can't wait see how many students will plays in the game.

• Change can't to cant

• Change plays to play

• Change students to studeents

• No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1C

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence? The dogs were playing so well together that it forgot to eat dinner.

• Change it to they

• Change dinner to dinners

• Change were playing to was playing

• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?

Dogs will also drinked a lot of water when they are tired.

• Change will to would

• Change drinked to drink

• Change water to waters

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.1.1E

CCSS.L.5.1C

What change, if any should be made to the sentence?

The dogs has a bowl just for their water.

• change the period to a question mark

• change has to have

• change bowl to bouwl

• no change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.1.1C

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

What change could improve the sentence?

Miley's dog was so faster, he ran past the fence!

• Change faster to fast

• Change ran to run

• Change the exclamation mark to a question mark

• No revision is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.K.1D

What is the most effective revision to make to the sentence?

• First, dogs like to eat a lot, then, they like to sleep after playing a lot because they get tired.

• Dogs get tired, usually after playing a lot they like to eat.

• The bestest thing a dog can do is play with you, they get tired and then they sleep.

• Dogs love to play, and then they usually get tired and are ready for a nap!

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F