Thesis writing

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• Unhealthy food can cause obesity in young people.

• Unhealthy food often contributes to weight problems among the young.

• All unhealthy food leads to the overweight problem among youngsters.

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• Most people love to watch TV.

• The vast majority of people enjoy watching television.

• All of us love to watch TV.

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• Most students in Hong Kong consider university to be their utmost goal.

• Students in Hong Kong consider studying at university to be the most important goal.

• Students in Hong Kong always consider that university is the most important goal.

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• Many people think that disabled are useless because they could not do anything.

• Many people think that people who are disabled cannot contribute because they have difficulty with most daily tasks.

• The public tends to have a negative stereotype that people with physical disabilities are incapable of functioning normally in daily life.

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• Knowing how to choose a good book to read is also important because books are valuable in allowing people to achieve their goals.

• Knowing how to choose a good book to read is also important because it is generally accepted that a good book can allow people to achieve their dream.

• How to choose a good book to read is also important for us, because, as we all know, a good book can lead us to achieve our dream.

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• However, it is certainly not an efficient way to develop country parks for residential and commercial purposes.

• However, it may not be an efficient way to develop country parks for residential and commercial purposes.

• However, it is almost certainly not an efficient way to develop country parks for residential and commercial purposes.

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• Definitely TV should be partly responsible for the mushrooming crimes in our modern society.

• It is highly likely that TV is partly responsible for the mushrooming crimes in modern society.

• Television is possibly partly responsible for the rapid increase in crime in modern society.

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• The majority of households own at least one television and a computer. 

• Almost every household owns at least one television and a computer. 

• Nowadays, every home has at least one television and computer.

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• The economic situation in Hong Kong is difficult and the unemployment rate is high.

• It is widely known that the Hong Kong economic situation is poor, and the unemployment rate is high. 

• In Hong Kong, everybody knows that the economic situation is quite bad and the unemployment rate is high.

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• There are often two sides to an argument.

• Everything has positive and negative side.

• An argument requires more than one point of view.