Revising with CRISTI

Read the Original Sentence: Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger. They like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger, for they like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

Read the Original Sentence: Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger. They like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger, while they like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

Read the Original Sentence: Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger. They like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger, and Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

Read the Original Sentence: Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger. They like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

Mayra and Ramon liked to eat at Whataburger. They also liked to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

Read the Original Sentence: Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger. They like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

Mayra and Ramon like to eat at Whataburger. Like to eat at Chick-Fil-A, McDonald's, and Wendy's.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

Read the Original Sentence: While the students went to lunch. Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

While the students went to lunch Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Read the Original Sentence: While the students went to lunch. Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

While the student went to lunch Ms. Duarte ate her pizzas.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Read the Original Sentence: While the students went to lunch. Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

While the students went to lunch, Ms. Duarte ate her pizza while the students went to lunch.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Read the Original Sentence: While the students went to lunch. Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

While the students went to lunch Ms. Duarte.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

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CCSS.L.4.1F

Read the Original Sentence: While the students went to lunch. Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

What is wrong with this revision sentence?

While the students go to lunch, Ms. Duarte ate her pizza.

• Changes the meaning

• Repeats words

• Incorrect usage of FANBOYS or AWUBISS

• Switches verb tenses

• Incomplete sentence

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F