Revising and Editing

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12?

(12) Novel writers has even made books about the depths of love.

• Change has even made to has even maked

• Change has even made to have even made

• Change depths to deepths

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 20?

(20) For instance, last semester I got behind on my

assignments, and had to spend every weekend for a month trying to catch back up.

• Delete the comma after assignments

• Change assignments to asignments

• Change got to gotten

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 25?

(25) While last months episodes may not have been as exciting as usual, each new season typically brings unanswered questions, plot twists, and new characters.

• Delete the comma after usual

• Change new to knew

• Change months to month’s

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 16?

(16) I realized very quickly that I was probably not going to persuade everyone that I was the best candidate, but hopefully I could convince enough people to change there mind about some of my opponents.

• Delete the comma before but

• Change there to their

• Change opponents to oponents

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

(1) The company has facilitators who lead participants through games and activities in which everyone must colaborate in order to successfully complete the challenges.

• Change activities to activitys

• Change colaborate to collaborate

• Change has to have

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1C

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

(6) Nowadays there are various professions that required speaking in multiple languages, especially english and spanish.

• Change Nowadays to Now a days

• Change various to varius

• Change required to require

• Change that to they

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1C

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

(7) Between the hundreds of incoming and outgoing flights, there is an airplane mechanic busyly filling up each of the aircraft with thousands of gallons of fuel.

• Change busyly to busily

• Change an airplane to a airplane

• Change fuel to full

• No change needed

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12?

(12) On a average day the Empire State Building in New York City receives more than ten thousand visitors.

• Change than to then

• Change a to an

• Change receives to recieves

• No change needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What is the correct way to write sentence 11?

(11) Therefore, quite a few animals, including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger,

and Mountain Gorilla, they have been added to the endangered species list.

• Therefore, quite a few animals have been added to the endangered species

  list. Including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger, and Mountain Gorilla.

• Therefore, quite a few animals, including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger,

  and Mountain Gorilla, have been added to the endangered species list.

• Therefore, quite a few animals, including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger, and Mountain Gorilla. They have been added to the endangered species list.

• Sentence 11 is written correctly in the paper.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the correct way to write sentences 12 and 13?

(12) When she arrives, she usually has a box. (13) Containing dozens of t-shirts

and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box, it is containing dozens of t-shirts and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box containing dozens of t-shirts and

  pants. That have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box it contains dozens of t-shirts and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box containing dozens of t-shirts and

  pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

Tags

CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C