Editing 11/11

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• A.

  Change rise to raise

• B.

  Change cities to cities’

• C.

  Insert a comma after supplies

• D.

  Change would not have occurred to will not have occurred

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• F.

  Change Bessemer’s to Bessemers

• G.

  Change invention to invension

• H.

  Change rely to relied

• J.

  Change iron to Iron

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• A.

  Change permanently to perminently

• B.

  Change changed to changes

• C.

  Change large to largest

• D.

  Change pittsburgh to Pittsburgh

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• F.

  Change violin to Violin

• G.

  Insert a comma after boring

• H.

  Change disagree to disagreeing

• J.

  No change is needed.

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• A.

  Change Friendships to Freindships

• B.

  Change as to until

• C.

  Change rehearse to will rehearse

• D.

  Change you’re to your

What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?

• F.

  All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it. When you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

• G.

  All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

• H.

  All of the effort, you invest in developing your skills. Is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.

• J.

  All of the effort you invest, in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage before an appreciative crowd.