Writing: Revising/Editing Set 2

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change Rathur to Rather

• Change the to a

• Change are grown to be grown

• Change water to waters

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Insert a comma after farming

• Change and to or

• Change to grow to growing

• Change more small to smaller

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change can be to was

• Change effectively to effective

• Delete the comma after greenhouses

• Change ruftops to rooftops

What change should be made in sentence 9?

• Change on the location to in the location

• Change hydroponic to Hydroponic

• Change most good to best

• Change choice to choyce