Formal Writing Speech Functions: DSE2018 Listening T10

Greeting: Please email Ryan Au, the artist.

• Dear Mr Au
• Dear Ryan Au
• Dear Mr Ryan Au
• Dear Ryan

Writing purpose: Give him some feedback on the samples he sent us for "Escape to Hong Kong Island".

• I am writing to give you some feedback on the samples you sent us for "Escape to Hong Kong Island".

• I'm writing to give you some feedback on the samples you sent us for "Escape to Hong Kong Island".

• I am writing a letter.

• I am Sammy Tsang.

Reporting on survey results: artwork on the map, majority parents and 12-15 year olds, love it

• As regards the artwork on the map, a majority of parents and 12-15 year olds loved it.
• As regards the artwork on the map, a majority of parents and 12-15 year olds love it.

Reporting on survey results: artwork on the cards, majority 12-15 year olds: love it, majority parents: hate it,

• As for the artwork on the cards, a majority of 12-15 year olds loved it while a majority of parents hated it.
• As for the artwork on the cards, a majority of 12-15 year olds love it while a majority of parents hate it.

Commenting: artwork: too much blood!

• There is too much blood in the artwork.

• There's too much blook in the artwork.

• Artwork too much blood!

• The artwork is too much blood.

Suggesting: colour of the text, on the map, better if it's darker

• The colour of the text on the map should be darker.
• The colour of the text on the map should darker.
• The colour of the text would be better if it were darker.
• The colour of the text on the map darker better.

Stipulating a deadline: artwork, get it done by 27th of this month

• The artwork has to be completed by 27th of this month.
• Get the artwork done by 27th of this month!
• Can you get the artwork done by 27th of this month?
• Artwork get it done by 27th of this month.

Closing

• We look forward to your finished artwork.
• We look forward to your reply.
• Thank you and good bye.
• Please do not hesitate to write to us again.

sincerely / faithfully: Dear Mr Au

• Yours sincerely

• Yours faithfully

Name and company

• Sammy Tsang, Griffin Workshop
• Sammy, Griffin Workshop
• Griffin Workshop, Sammy
• Griffin Workshop, Sammy Tsang