revising and editing

• Delete the comma

• Change and to I was

• Change hungry to hungrey

• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Joseph said he knew his uncles had thrown a party for theirselves.

• Change knew to new
• Change thrown to threw
• Change theirselves to themselves
• No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.3.1E

• Change Emma’s to Emmas’

• Change Greek and Latin to greek and latin

• Change root’s to roots

• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

J LO Barbie

(1)If you are a fan of Jennifer Lopez you must have the latest doll from a popular toy manufacturing company. (2) Mattel Inc. has designed two contemporary Jennifer Lopez Barbie dolls. (3) The first barbie is a replica of Jennifer’s style from her Dance Again World Tour. (4) Barbie is dressed in a sequin covered full-length bodysuit. (5) The second Barbie figurine is a alluring red carpet doll that imitates Jennifer’s gorgeous gown at the 2012 Academy Awards. (6) Each of these fabulous dolls is available at BarbieCollector.com for $29.95. (7) "I wanted to live in Barbie's world. (8) I wanted to be Barbie," Lopez said as she held up the new Barbie dolls in a recent interview. (9) Designer of the dolls, Robert Best, had high praise for J Lo’s career. (10) "She really worked his way to the top," said Best. (11) "I think she's gotten to where she is through hard work, and dedication, and she's really an incredible role model for young girls." (12) One little girl, will find it easy to look up to Lopez as a role model. (13) Jennifer’s own daughter, four-year-old Emme, is certain to get plenty of play time with the new designer Barbie dolls.

1 What change should be made in sentence 1?

• Change fan to Fan

• Add a comma after Lopez

• Change latest to lattest

• Change company to Company

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

Mrs. Watson said that our class would go on a field trip on March, 2 2015.

• Delete the comma after March and insert it after 2
• Add quotatiion marks before our and after 2015.
• Delete the comma after March
• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2D

• Delete the comma after long

• Delete the quotation marks after Samantha and add quotation marks after the exclamation point

• Change the period to an exclamation point

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

What is the best change we can make to this sentence:

"First you do your homework, than you can play on your phone," the exasperated mother replied.

• Change than to then

• Change your to you're

• Change mother to Mother

• Change replied to replyed

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

• Change knew to new

• Change made to making

• Change theirselves to themselves

• No revision is needed

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CCSS.L.2.1C

CCSS.L.2.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1B

Send It!*

(1) Rock climbing is a demanding sport, one that will test a climber's strength, persistence, alertness, and balance. (2) It is a risky sport and awareness of climbing techniques and the specialized equipment is critical for safety. (3) Rock climbing is a sport where individuals climb natural rock structures or man-made rock walls. (4) Rock climbing is not an adults-only sport. (5) Climbing can be the perfect sport for kids and teens. (6) It is also a great way to learn other important life skills. (7) Climbing is a treacherous sport and is not a sport kids should try on their own. (8) Certain techniques are needed that can best be taught by good climbers. (9) The easiest way to get started is to find a rock climbing gym in your area and sign up for a class. (10) Once there you will learn the essentials and will meet more seasoned climbers that can coach you.

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 10?

• Once there, you will learn the essentials as you meet more seasoned climbers that can coach you.

• Once you are there. You will likely meet more seasoned climbers than you.

• You will learn the essentials and you will meet more seasoned climbers like you that can coach you.

• You will learn the essentials and meet more people that you can coach once you are there.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

• Change help to helping

• Change hands and knees to hand’s and knee’s

• Change dropped to droped

• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.2.2C