Fortnite Revising / Editing

If you have been awake and playing the game or any one of its 2. friendly neighbors out there then you understand Fortnite has 3. swept over pretty much all game styles in the last few months.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• In line 1, there should be a comma before “or”.

• In line 2, there should be a comma after “there”.

• n line 2, Fortnite should not be capitalized.

• . In line 3, “swept” should be “sweeps”.

1. What would you do if you were caught in an Hunger Games scenario?

2. Many of us believe we’d be incredible leaders and fighters in a

3. wasteland, when in reality everyone and everything would fall apart.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• In line 1, “an” needs to be changed to “a”.

• In line 1, the question mark needs to be a period.

• n line 2, “incredible” is spelled wrong

• In line 3, the comma between “wasteland” and ”when” is not needed.

1. Fortnite continues it’s reign in the gaming

2. world. It has taken over so many gaming

3. platforms.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• In line 1, the word “reign” should be “rein”

• In line 2, there should be a comma instead of a period.

• In line 1, “it’s” should be “its”.

• In line 3, platforms should be singular.

1. The Battle Royale tournament had over 42M live views

2. and they set a record for biggest single live gaming

3. stream at 1.1M concurrent.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 1, Battle Royale does not need to be capitalized.

• B. In line 1, “views” should be “view”.

• C. In line 2, ”a” should be “an”.

• D. In line 1, a comma is needed after “views” to make a compound sentence.

1. For boys in particular, video games serve as a major venue

2. for the creation and maintenance of friendships it also

3. serves as a way for boys to be creative and imaginative.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 3, “for” should be “four”.

• B. In line 3, a comma is needed after the word “creative”.

• C. In line 2, a period is needed after “friendship” to begin a new sentence.

• D. In line 1, the comma is not needed after “particular”.

1. Fully 72% of all teens play video games on a

2. computer game console, or portable device like a

3. cellphone, and 81% of teens have or have access

4. to a game console.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 2, a comma is needed after ”computer”.

• B. In line 1, “games” needs to be singular.

• C. In line 3, a comma is not needed after ”cellphone”.

• D. In line 4, “to” should be “too”.

1. More then half of teens have made new friends

2. online, and a third of them (36%) say they have met

3. their new friend or friends while playing video games.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 1, “have” should be “has”.

• B. In line 2, “their” should be “there”.

• C. In line 1, “then” should be “than”.

• D. In line 3, “playing” should be “played”.

1. Video games are not simply entertaining media;

2. they also serve as an opportunity for

3. socializing four teens with new friends and old.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 1, the semicolon is not needed.

• B. In line 2, ”opportunity” should be “oportunity”.

• C. In line 3, “new” should be “knew”.

• D. In line 3, “four” should be “for”.

1. A high school AP computer science teacher, Nick

2. Gutierrez, said there has been a surge in kids

3. neglecting there schoolwork in favor of playing Fortnite.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 2, “there” should be “their”.

• B. In line 3, “there” should be “their”.

• C. In line 1, there should be no comma after “teacher”.

• D. In line 1, there should be a comma after “school”.

1. Epic Games launched the mobile version of their

2. hugely successful PC and console title, Fortnite, last

3. week, witch topped the iOS charts in 47 countries less

4. than 24 hours after launch and raked in $1 million in in

5. app purchases.

Choose the answer below that has the correct changes.

• A. In line 2, “hugely” should be “huge”.

• B. In line 4, “than” should be “then”.

• C. In line 1, “launched” should be “launch”.

• D. In line 3, “witch” should be “which”.