5C's of Written Communication REVIEW

The beautiful, majestic, and breath-taking city of Rome was visited by many tourists from America during the hot summer.

Which of the following is the best revision to achieve CONCISENESS?

• Many American tourists visit the beautiful, majestic, and breath-taking city of Rome in summer.

• Many American tourists visit the city of Rome.

• Many American tourists visit the beautiful city of Rome in summer.

• Many American tourists visit Rome.

Prior to coming to First Trust, Kimberly worked at Waconia Savings and Loan.

What is the best thing that we can do with this sentence?

• use verbs for nouns

• use simple or familiar word

• use positive language

• use single word for long phrase

The CEO will conduct an assessment of the new program.

What is the best thing that we can do with this sentence?

• use verbs for nouns

• use simple or familiar word

• use positive language

• use single word for long phrase

Due to the fact that the report is more than 10 pages long, the council feels surprised by it.

What is the best thing that we can do with this sentence?

• use verbs for nouns

• use simple or familiar word

• use positive language

• use single word for long phrase

You haven't done your part in the project. This was really disappointing.

What is the best thing that we can do with this sentence?

• use "you" attitude

• use simple or familiar word

• use positive language

• use single word for long phrase

I have requested that your order is sent out today.

What is the best thing that we can do with this sentence?

• use "you" attitude

• use simple or familiar word

• use positive language

• use single word for long phrase

Your assignment is overdo, and you will loose ten points.

The sentence uses "you" attitude correctly.

• YES

• NO

Your peer review for ‘The Customer Experience at the Richmond Olympic Experience Museum’ is completed and includes overall impressions and notes for each section of the Report. Your questions are welcome.

The sentence uses "you" attitude correctly.

• YES

• NO

The pies were baked by the parents of the second graders.

Which of the following is the best revision to achieve CONCISENESS?

• The pies were baked by the supportive parents of the second graders in school.

• The pies were baked by the parents.

• The pies were baked.

• The second graders’ parents baked the pies.

Identify the error in the sentence. My mom made dinner I ate at home and it was so delicious.

• Run-on Sentence

• Comma Splice

• Fragment

• No Error