Set 2 STAAR Edit and Revise Review

1. What change should be made in sentence 3?

• A. Change had looked to had looking

• B. Change at towith

• C. Insert a comma after cards

• D. Change flowers to flours

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

2. What change should be made in sentence 5?

• F. Change speshal to special

• G. Change whose to who

• H. Change encouraged to encourages

• J. Change him to he

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.6.1A

CCSS.L.6.1C

CCSS.L.6.1D

3. What change should be made in sentence 7?

• A. Change would write to written

• B. Change poem to Poem

• C. Change about to at

• D. Change our Guide to Our Guide

Tags

CCSS.RI.1.5

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.5.3

4. What change should be made in sentence 2?

• F. Change palo duro to Palo Duro

• G. Change large to larger

• H. Delete the word so

• J. Change by to from

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

5. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

• A. Change relaxed to relaxing

• B. Change her tomy

• C. Change surroundings to suroundings

• D. No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

6. What change should be made in sentence 7?

• F. Change had reached to are reaching

• G. Change canyons to canyon’s

• H. Insert a comma after top

• J. Change after to by

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

7. What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 2?

• A. Excitedly, children talk inside the tents about topics like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare.

• B. Children talk excitedly about topics inside the tents like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare.

• C. Inside the tents children talk excitedly about topics like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare.

• D. Children talk inside the tents about topics like slime, magic tricks, and pet daycare excitedly.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1G

8. Julie wants to use a more descriptive word than have in sentence 6.

Which word should replace have in this sentence?

• F. start

• G. make

• H. invent

• J. produce

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.1.1F

9. Which sentence should Julie add after sentence 17 to BEST support the ideas in the fourth paragraph (sentences 17–19)?

• A. In fact, parents may not even answer questions from possible buyers.

• B. However, parents do enjoy watching their children spend time with their peers.

• C. But there are many other ways that parents can support their children at the fair.

• D. After all, a parent could charge a customer the wrong price for a product.

Tags

CCSS.RI.1.5

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

10 Which transition should be added to the beginning of sentence 25?

• F. Fortunately

• G. Then

• H. Certainly

• J. Now

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E