A Day at the Farmers' Market

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 6?

• Mom and I go to a local farmers' market every Saturday morning.

• Now and then on Saturdays we go to a farmers' market.

• Sometimes on a Saturday Mom land I go to a farmers' market.

• Always on Saturday mornings Mom and I go to a farmers' market.

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6.10C

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 14?

• Unlike supermarkets or grocery stores, farmers' markets sell fruits, vegetables, cheeses, and sometimes meats that are grown locally.

• Supermarkets and grocery stores as well as farmers' markets only sell locally grown foods.

• Supermarkets and grocery stores are like farmers' markets in that they sell fruits, vegetables, cheeses, and local meats.

• No revision is needed in this sentence.

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6.10C

In sentence 17, Sarah uses the nice to describe the fruits and vegetables. Which of the following is a more effective word to use in this sentence?

• good

• smooth

• luscious

• pretty

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6.10C

What is the BEST way to revise paragraph 4?

• Put sentence 23 after sentence 24.

• Put sentence 23 at the beginning of the paragraph.

• Put sentence 23 at the end of the paragraph.

• No revision is needed in this paragraph.

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6.10C

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 31?

• I begin receiving text messages. They are telling me what to buy. Some of them even want to know where I am and ask if they can come meet me.

• I begin receiving text messages telling me what I should buy. Some of them even want to know where I am and ask if they can come meet me.

• I begin receiving text messages. They tell me what I should buy. Some of them even want to know where I am. They ask if they can come meet me.

• No revision is needed in this sentence.

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6.10C

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 33?

• Change Its to It's

• Add a question mark to the end of the sentence

• Change the word beautiful to beautifull

• No revision is needed in this sentence.

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6.10D.ix