Revise and Edit

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• I went to the store and bought apples, oranges and bananas.

• I went to the store and bought apples, oranges, and, bananas.

• I went to the store, and bought apples oranges and bananas.

• I went to the store and bought apples, oranges, and bananas.

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CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

Choose the word that best completes this sentence:

The championship games continued ___________ the bad weather.

• therefore

• by

• although

• despite

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Choose the sentence that is written correctly.

• We went to their house because there hosting a party.

• They're having a party at there house this weekend.

• We went to their house because they're hosting a party.

• There having a party at their house this weekend.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

Because Mariah always told them about her day, they were shocked when they didn’t hear from her. Which sentence below provides more clarity?

• Change they to her parents

• Change shocked to surprised

• Change day to it

• Change always to usually

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CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Reading books and magazines are my favorite activity to do during independent study time.

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence?

• Add a comma after books

• Change favorite to favourite

• Change are to is

• No change should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.3.1A

Todays objective is to learn how to revise and edit our own essays.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change is to are

• Change essays to essay’s

• Change Todays to Today’s

• Change objective to objetive

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CCSS.L.2.2C

The researchers discovered that the pizza has more nourishment then the hamburger.

What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?

• Change then to than

• Change nourishment to norishment

• Change discovered to discover

• No change needs to be made in the sentence

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CCSS.L.3.1G

You don’t want to get bit by this deadly spider. It has poison oozing from its fangs.

What is the best way to combine the sentences?

• You don’t want to get bit by this deadly spider, it has poison oozing from its fangs.

• Although it has poison oozing from its fangs, you don’t want to get bit by this deadly spider.

• You don’t want to get bit by this deadly spider, for it has poison oozing from its fangs.

• When this spider is deadly, it has fangs with poison oozing from them.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

During the student’s presentation, her phone began to ring.

What is the best way to revise the sentence?

• The student was presenting and this is when her phone began to ring.

• Presenting is when her phone began to ring.

• During the student’s presentation; her phone began to ring.

• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D