Revising and editing review
Authored by Miriam Loera
English
7th Grade
CCSS covered
Used 2+ times
AI Actions
Add similar questions
Adjust reading levels
Convert to real-world scenario
Translate activity
More...
Content View
Student View
10 questions
Show all answers
1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
When Thomas missed him, he would sit in the woods, and the sound of the birds chirping was what he would listen to.
What is the most effective revision to make?
Thomas would watch and listen to the sounds of birds chirping when he missed him in the woods.
When Thomas missed him, he would sit in the woods he would watch and listen to the sounds of birds chirping.
Thomas would watch, and he would listen to the sounds of birds chirping in the woods when he missed him.
When Thomas missed him, he would sit in the woods and listen to the sound of birds chirping.
Tags
CCSS.L.2.1F
CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.3.1I
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.7.1B
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Eric loved to visit with Professor Wilson. He was an elderly man whose education had led him to teach at the local university.
What is the most effective way to combine the sentences?
Eric loved to visit with Professor Wilson while he was an elderly man whose education had led him to teach at the local university.
Eric loved to visit with Professor Wilson, an elderly man whose education had led him to teach at the local university.
Eric loved to visit with Professor Wilson and an elderly man whose education had led him to teach at the local university.
Eric loved to visit with Professor Wilson, he was an elderly man whose education had led him to teach at the local university
Tags
CCSS.L.2.1F
CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.3.1I
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.7.1B
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
Looking for her dog, the shelter is where she went.
What is the most effective revision to make in the sentence?
Looking for her dog, the young girl went into the shelter.
She looked for her dog, she went into the shelter.
Looking for her dog was when she went into the shelter.
No revision needed in the sentence.
Tags
CCSS.L.11-12.3A
CCSS.L.7.1C
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
He was learning how to solve equations. He found a trick that would make it easier.
What is the most effective way to combine the 2 sentences?
While learning how to solve equations, he found a trick that would make it easier.
He was learning how to solve equations because he found a trick that would make it easier.
While learning how to solve equations, a trick that he figured out made it easier.
He was learning to solves the equations, then, he found a trick that would make it easier
Tags
CCSS.L.2.1F
CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.3.1I
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.7.1B
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
The students at the school were encouraged by their teacher’s positive attitude and by their teacher’s happy attitude.
What is the best way to revise the sentence?
The students at the school were encouraged when their teacher’s happy and positive attitude encouraged them.
The students at the school were encouraged by their teacher’s happy and positive attitude.
The students at the school were encouraged by their teacher, who had her happy and positive attitude.
The students at the school were encouraged by their teacher, her positive and happy attitude.
Tags
CCSS.L.11-12.3A
CCSS.L.7.1C
6.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
I admit that I had enjoyed going to middle school the last 3 years until now.
What change should be made in the sentence?
Change admit to admitt
Change that to it
Change had enjoyed to have enjoyed
Insert a comma after school
Tags
CCSS.L.3.2C
CCSS.L.4.2B
CCSS.L.6.3A
7.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
30 sec • 1 pt
It’s reasons for being there are to balance the beam and prevent disaster.
What change, if any, needs to be made in the sentence?
Change It’s to Its
Change are to is
Change balance to balence
No change needs to be made in this sentence.
Tags
CCSS.L.1.1B
CCSS.L.2.2C
CCSS.L.3.2D
Access all questions and much more by creating a free account
Create resources
Host any resource
Get auto-graded reports
Continue with Google
Continue with Email
Continue with Classlink
Continue with Clever
or continue with
Microsoft
%20(1).png)
Apple
Others
Already have an account?
