Embedding Quotes and Parenthetical Citations

Which of the following is an acceptable embed?

• People spend more when they use a credit card, "[cash] no longer becomes a tangible item" (Lombardo 11).

• In the article, it states, "It no longer becomes a tangible item" (Lombardo 11).

• Lombardo says, "it no longer becomes a tangible item" (Lombardo 11).

• Lombardo says people spend more when they use a credit card because cash "no longer becomes a tangible item" (11).

Which of the following is an acceptable embed?

• "Handling paper cash has virtually no cost to it at all," says Lombardo (11).

• One benefit of cash is that it "has virtually no cost" (Lombardo 11).

• According to Crystal Lombardo of Vision Launch, "Handling paper cash has virtually no cost to it at all" (11).

• Cash does not cost money, "virtually no cost" (Lombardo 11).

Which of the following is an acceptable embed?

• One problem with cash is that the "ink, paper, and even the designs on physical money all have costs associated with them" (Lombardo 10).

• Some of the costs associated with cash are "ink, paper, and [...] designs" (Lombardo 10).

• According to Crystal Lombardo, she says, "ink, paper, and even the designs" (10).

• Lombardo states, "The ink, paper, and even the designs on physical money all have associated costs" (10).

Which of the following is an acceptable embed?

• Megan Winkler states, "About 80 percent of our transaction" (5).

• According to Megan Winkler, "About 80 percent of our transactions are facilitated electronically" (5).

• According to Megan Winkler, around "80 percent" of transactions in the United States are "facilitated electronically" (5).

• According to Megan Winkler, "facilitated electronically" (5).

Which of the following is an acceptable embed?

• Giving up cash would mean that governments would have "unprecedented access to information" (Winkler 5).

• The article states, "give governments unprecedented access to information" (Winkler 5).

• In the article "Just How Close Are We to a Cashless Society," "give governments unprecedented access to information" (Winkler 5).

• In the article, it says that giving up cash would mean that governments would have "unprecedented access to information" (Winkler 5).

Which of the following is an acceptable embed?

• Maria LaMagna claims, "There are approximately 2 billion adults without bank accounts worldwide" (8)

• In "Here's What Would Happen if America Totally Abandoned Cash," Maria LaMagna claims, "There are approximately 2 billion adults without bank accounts worldwide, according to the World Bank" (8).

• The number of adults in the world who do not have bank accounts is "approximately 2 billion" (LaMagna 8).

• LaMagna states, "2 billion adults" (8).

If there are two authors, you put both last names in the citation in the order they are listed in the packet. For example: (Smith and Wesson 9). Pretend you have two authors, Tiffany Duluth and Ron Bloom, and the page is 10. What should the citation look like?

• (Duluth and Bloom 10).

• (Tiffany and Ron 10).

• (Duluth, Bloom 10).

• (Bloom, Duluth 10).

Which of the following has acceptable spacing for the citation?

• There are many fees associated with digital banking, and "cash is the last free alternative" (LaMagna 8).

• There are many fees associated with digital banking, and "cash is the last free alternative"(LaMagna 8) .

• There are many fees associated with digital banking, and "cash is the last free alternative" ( LaMagna 8 ) .

• There are many fees associated with digital banking, and "cash is the last free alternative"( LaMagna 8).

Hawley makes his stance towards violence clear early in his speech: "Violence is not how you achieve change. Violence is not how you achieve something better" (Hawley 1).

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He doesn't think that the law passed in PA was constitutional: "I am not aware of any court that has passed on its constitutionality" (Hawley 3).

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