Grade 10 SBE - Shaka Quiz

Refer to Introduction 1. The main weakness of this introduction is:

• The Stance and CA are not clearly stated

• Transition words are not used between Stance and CA

• Quotes or specific information is used in the intro

• It is too short

• There is nothing wrong with this introduction, it is very good!

Refer to Introduction 2. The main weakness of this introduction is:

• The Stance and CA are not clearly stated

• Transition words are not used between Stance and CA

• Quotes or specific information from the sources is used in the intro

• It is too short

• There is nothing wrong with this introduction, it is very good!

Refer to Introduction 3. The weaknesses of this introduction include:

• The Stance is clear but the CA is not

• Transition words are not used between Stance and CA

• Quotes or specific information from the sources is used in the intro

• It uses 'greater extent' twice

• There is nothing wrong with this introduction, it is very good!

Refer to Introduction 4. The weaknesses of this introduction include:

• 'Extent' is not used in the CA

• Transition words are not used between Stance and CA

• Quotes or specific information from the sources is used in the intro

• 'It is argued' should not be used - writer must 'own' his/her opinion.

• There is nothing wrong with this introduction, it is very good!

Refer to Introduction 5. The MAIN weakness of this intro is:

• Stance and CA are not clear

• Transition words are not used between the Stance and CA

• Quotes or specific information from the sources is used in the intro

• 'Many/Other historians' should not be used - writer must 'own' his/her opinion.

• There is nothing wrong with this introduction, it is very good!

Refer to Body Paragragh 1. The only 'weakness' is:

• The point at the start is vague and unclear

• PEEL is not used at all

• 'He describes Shaka as a military genius' - this doesn't fit in with the POINT

• It is a 'single source' paragraph

• There is no 'link' at the end

Refer to Body Paragragh 2. The only 'weakness' is:

• The point at the start is vague and unclear

• PEEL is not used at all

• It is a 'single source' paragraph

• There is no 'link' at the end

• There are NO major problems with this paragragh

Refer to Body Paragraph 3. The only 'weakness' is:

• Some of the evidence

  doesn't gel with the POINT

• Too many sources are used

• Poor referencing - Sources aren't correctly referenced

• There is no 'link' at the end

• There are NO major problems with this paragragh

Refer to Body Paragraph 4. Weaknesses include:

• Quote for Source F ('It was this...') is too long

• The POINT is difficult to follow

• Poor referencing - Sources aren't correctly referenced

• There is no 'link' at the end

• There are NO major problems with this paragragh

Refer to Body Paragraph 5. The main weakness is:

• Sources are not referenced correctly

• The Point contains a quote

• There is no 'link' at the end

• There are NO major problems with this paragragh