Unit 4 Editing and Revision Assessment

What change should be made in sentence 1?

• Change book to books
  

• Change wrote to written
  

• Change optimistic. to optimistic?

• Make no change

What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

• Change when to When
  

• Change down to done
  

• Change grandma to Grandma

• Change will be to was

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change that shoe to those shoes

• Change He to She

• Change find to finds

• Make no change

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change give to gave

• Change two pairs to two pares

• Change They have to He has
  

• Make no change

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change christmas to Christmas

• Change one to won

• Change them to they

• Make no change

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change Finally to Finaly
  

• Change shoes to shoos.

• Change smallest to smaller

• Make no change

Stephanie would like to place a sentence before sentence 1 that helps create a more effective opening for her essay. Which of the following would fit best before sentence 1?

• Opal is nice.

• Most kids hang out with friends their own age.

• How old were you when you met your first friend?

• Opal feels old for her age.

Which is the BEST way to combine sentences 3 and 4?

• She has some younger friends like The Dewberry brothers and

  Sweetie Pie Thomas.

• She has younger friends. The Dewberry brothers and Sweetie Pie Thomas.

• She has Dewberry and Sweetie Pie as friends.

• She has some younger friends and some older friends.

Stephanie has included a sentence that does not belong in the 4th paragraph (sentences 7-9). Which sentence should she remove?

• Sentence 7

• Sentence 8

• Sentence 9

• Make no changes

What is the best way to revise sentence 10 ?

• Gloria Dump is calling a witch by the neighborhood kids.

• Gloria Dump is called a witch for the neighborhood kids.

• Gloria Dump is one of the neighborhood kids.

• Make no changes