Week 27 Editing A Message in the Sky

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• Change added to adding

• Change exaust to exhaust

• Change to create to and create

• Change streams to stream's

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change should be made in sentence 10?

• Change visibility to visible

• Change is to are

• Change dependent to dependant

• Change whether to weather

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 14?

• Change captain to Captain

• Delete the comma after Mail

• Change the name to it is the name

• No change needs to be made.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What is the correct way to write sentence 20?

• Skywriting pilots targeted the crowds at fairgrounds, racetracks, and beaches. Although ads could stretch out across 15 miles and be seen up to 30 miles away.

• Skywriting pilots targeted the crowds at fairgrounds, racetracks, and beaches. So the ads could stretch out across 15 miles and be seen up to 30 miles away.

• Skywriting pilots targeted the crowds at fairgrounds, racetracks, and beaches. Ads could stretch out across 15 miles and be seen up to 30 miles away.

• Sentence 20 is written correctly in the paper.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change needs to be made in sentence 24?

• Change including to included

• Delete the comma after Ford

• Change its to their

• Change ads to ad’s

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 26?

• Change could not to could not never

• Change advances to advanses

• Change made to making

• No change needs to be made.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change should be made in sentence 29?

• Change eventually to eventualy

• Change that to what

• Change were to was

• Change reliably to reliable

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

How should sentence 36 be changed?

• Delete the comma after companies

• Change events to event's

• Change writes to write

• Change proposals to proposes

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 38?

• Change sights to sites

• Change their to her

• Change location to locations

• Sentence 38 does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5