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What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

• The ad said you are looking for a responsible individual who has pet care experience, excellent communication skills, and great compassion for animals.

• The ad said that you are looking for a responsible individual. Who has pet care experience, excellent communication skills, and great compassion for animals.

• The ad said you are looking for a responsible individual who has pet care experience. Plus a person who has excellent communication skills, and great compassion for animals.

• The ad said you are looking for a responsible individual who has pet care experience, excellent communication skills this person also has great compassion for animals.

What change needs to be made in sentence 6?

• Change has owned to had owned

• Change the comma after rodents to a semicolon

• Change I to they

• Change caretaker to Caretaker

What change needs to be made in sentence 14?

• Change I know to Knowing

• Change are to is

• Change passionate to passionite

• Change about to for

What change needs to be made in sentence 17?

• Change their to your

• Change commercials to comercials

• Change highlight to highlights

• Insert a comma after relationships

What change needs to be made in sentence 22?

• Change Furthermore to Therefore

• Change secretary to secretery

• Change volunteer to volunteered

• Change Humane Society to humane Society

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What change needs to be made in sentence 3?

• Delete the comma after skies

• Change are to is

• Change geology to Geology

• Change unforgettible to unforgettable

How should sentence 5 be changed?

• Delete the comma after behind

• Change me to I

• Change will head to headed

• Change east to East

What is the correct way to rewrite sentence 7?

• Two hours later the car stopped, and my head shot up. I must have dozed off.

• Two hours later, the car stopped, and my head shot up; but then I must have dozed off.

• The car stopped two hours later. My head shot up; yet I must have dozed off.

• The car stopped, my head shot up, it was two hours later and I must have dozed off.

What change is needed in sentence 9?

• Change Wearing to Wear

• Change smothered to smuthered

• Delete the comma after sunscreen

• Change parks to park's