Thesis Statements

Which is a better thesis statement?

• Music makes people happy.

• Music therapy is useful in relieving stress and other conditions.

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CCSS.W.7.1A

CCSS.W.7.1B

Which two of the following should a thesis statement include?

• An opinion about the topic

• Stating a fact

• Addressing two topics at once

• One or two sentences

What is a thesis statement?

• A general idea of what the essay is about
• A summary of the main idea
• A statement that explains the main idea of an essay
• A suggestion that you should read the essay

Rylee is writing a argumentative essay about school uniforms. Which answer BEST represents a strong thesis statement?

• School uniforms can be found in many environments like public and private schools.

• School uniforms have a negative impact on students because uniforms restrict individuality, are expensive, and are uncomfortable.

• School uniforms restrict individuality.

• School uniforms can be both good and bad.

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CCSS.W.7.1A

CCSS.W.7.1B

What is the thesis formula?

______ + _____, _____, and _____.

• Reason + anecdote and explanation.

• Claim + anecdote, explanation, and transition.

• Claim + reason1, reason2, and reason3.

• Transition + topic, anecdote, and explanation.

Jake is writing a persuasive essay about why Virginia Tech is the best college. What is the BEST example of a strong PERSUASIVE THESIS STATEMENT?

• Although there are many options for higher education in the commonwealth, it's obvious that Virginia Tech is the best choice.

• In addition to Virginia Tech's science, agriculture, and engineering programs, the school's arts and humanities classes are great as well.

• Lastly, Virginia Tech features a very competitive veterinary medicine program.

• Virginia Tech students receive the best overall education because of the strong academic programs, the opportunities for research and internships, and the exciting atmosphere and student life.

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CCSS.W.7.1A

CCSS.W.7.1B

CCSS.W.7.4

CCSS.W.7.1C

Now, use the following topic sentences and create a thesis statement.

-One of the greatest parts of Halloween is getting to dress up in a fun costume.

-The second reason Halloween is so great is all the candy.

-Lastly, carving pumpkins is an awesome part of Halloween.

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CCSS.W.7.1A

CCSS.W.7.1B

CCSS.W.7.2A

Create a thesis statement from the prompt.

Explain the issues that cellphones in school might cause on campus.

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CCSS.W.7.1A

CCSS.W.7.1B

CCSS.W.7.2A

CCSS.W.7.4

CCSS.W.7.2B

Which of the following makes the best thesis statement?

• Even though marriage is a strong and respected institution in Russia, more and more people are choosing to live together before marriage, despite the cultural pressures. 
• I am going to explain why many couples in Russia are choosing to live together rather than get married.
• Marriage in Russia

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CCSS.W.7.1A

CCSS.W.7.1B

CCSS.W.7.2A

CCSS.W.7.4

What should you avoid in your thesis statement?

• Facts

• Picking a side

• Using "I" or "me" or "my"