Revising & Editing 5th Grade

Which of the following is a complete sentence?

• Because night fell.

• Jim ate the sandwich.

• On a tree-lined path.

• In our neck of the woods.

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.7.1B

Which of the following sentences is correctly punctuated?

• In the dead of night. The van pulled up.

• Check would not, give Jaime the seat.

• Over coffee and toast, Kelly told me about her new job.

• Lemonade. My favorite drink.

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CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.5.2

Which of the following sentences correctly uses a conjunction?

• I cannot play in the game until I practice more.

• I hid in the basement my brother was mad at me.

• Victor erased the answering machine message Nora would not find out.

• She scored a goal won the game.

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

Which of the underlined words or phrases in the following sentences could be deleted without changing the meaning?

Various different companies offer incentive plans to their employees.

• different

• incentive

• plans

• employees

Which of the underlined words in the following sentence is an unnecessary qualifier or intensifier?

Many experts consider stained glass in that church to be the very best.

• experts

• stained

• that

• very

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CCSS.L.1.1F

CCSS.L.2.1E

Choose the best conjunction to combine this sentence pair.

We can ask directions. We can use a map.

• and

• but

• or

• because

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

The following sentence pair can be revised into one better sentence. Choose the sentence that is the best revision.

The bicycle tire is flat. The bicycle tire is on the bike.

• The bicycle tire is on the bike and the bicycle tire is flat.

• The flat bicycle tire is on the bike.

• On the bike, the bicycle tire there is flat.

• The bicycle tire on the bike is flat.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Select the letter for the topic sentence in the following paragraph.

A. hE WAS BORN IN 1818. He was educated in the universities of Moscow and St. Petersburg. c. In 1852, He abandoned poetry and drama and devoted himself to fiction. d. Ivan Turgenev was a critically acclaimed Russian author.

• A

• B

• C

• D

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.2

CCSS.RI.5.2

CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RL.5.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

Which of the following sentence is considered transitional?

We did not catch any fish; as a result. we ate macaroni and cheese.

• did not

• any

• as a result

• and

Which of the underlined words in the following paragraph is a transition word?

A National Park Service employee annually inspects the famous Mount Rushmore National Memorial near Keystone, South Dakota. He uses ropes and harnesses to take a close look at the 60-foot granite heads of George Washington, Theodore Roosevelt, Thomas Jefferson, and Abraham Lincoln. If he finds a crack, he coats it with a sealant, thereby preventing moisture from cracking it further.

• annually

• near

• and

• thereby

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E