DOL 2/28/24 4.11C Class 1

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 5?

• Like the end of the school day, we practiced getting on and off.

• The end of the school day we practiced getting on and off.

• We practiced getting on and off like it was the end of the school day.

• No revision should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 6 and 7?

• Getting on or off the bus before your turn can be very dangerous and some kids have tried to do it.

• Some kids tried to get on or off before it was their turn which is dangerous because people can get pushed or hurt.

• Some kids tried to get on or off the bus before their turn which is dangerous in different ways if you try it.

• Getting on or off the bus before your turn can be dangerous, so kids tried to do it.

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 10?

• Next, we learned only that a bus driver sees some of the area outside of the bus around.

• Next, we learned where a bus driver only sees some of the area around the outside of the bus.

• Next, we learned that a bus driver only sees some of the area around the outside of the bus.

• No revision should be made in this sentence.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Lilian would like to replace sentence 13 with a sentence that will improve the clarity of her paragraph. Which sentence should she use?

• The bus driver must be trained to handle emergency situations.

• Some buses have additional mirrors or cameras.

• This area around the bus is called the danger zone.

• Students are taught to walk in front of the bus when crossing.

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CCSS.RI.1.3

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.5.3

What is the best way to combine the ideas in sentences 17 and 18 to create one clear and effective sentence?

• We need to practice the rules by ourselves, or we'll all have a safe and fun ride to school every day.

  
  

• We need to practice the rules by ourselves, so we'll all have a safe and fun ride to school every day.

  
  

• We need to practice the rules by ourselves, however, we'll all have a safe and fun ride to school every day.

  
  

• We need to practice the rules by ourselves, nor we'll all have a safe and fun ride to school every day.

  
  

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E