School Mural - KSA 2022 Released Editing & Revising

Which is the best choice for

underlined phrase 1?

A. NO CHANGE

B. need to discussing

C. would need to discuss

D. will need to be discussing

• A

• B

• C

• D

Which is the best choice for

underlined word 2?

A. NO CHANGE

B. raise

C. raised

D. will raise

• A

• B

• C

• D

Which is the best choice for

underlined phrase 3?

A. NO CHANGE

B. new this year right?

C. new this year, right?

D. new this year: right?

• A

• B

• C

• D

Which is the best choice for

underlined phrase 4?

A NO CHANGE

B Kendra, what

C Kendra; what

D Kendra: what

• A

• B

• C

• D

Which are the best choices for

underlined phrase 5? Select two

correct answers.

A NO CHANGE

B A mural, a stained glass window or

a mosaic

C A mural, a stained glass window, or

a mosaic

D A mural, a stained glass, window, or

a mosaic

E A mural, a stained glass window, or,

a mosaic

• A

• B

• C

• D

• E

Which sentence best combines the underlined sentences 6.

• Kendra was walking around the classroom and while she was walking she was handing out sheets of paper.

• Kendra walked around the classroom giving each Art Club member a sheet of paper.

• Kenda has sheets of paper. Kendra gave them to Art Club members

• Kendra walked and handed out papers.

Which words could best replace

the underlined word 7? Select two

correct answers.

A boring

B dark

C distant

D dull

E shady

• A

• B

• C

• D

• E

Which are the best choices for

underlined phrase 8? Select two

correct answers.

A NO CHANGE

B interesting at both dropoff and

pickup

C interesting at both dropoff or also

pickup

D interesting, both at dropoff and at

pickup

E interesting, at both dropoff and

also at pickup

• A

• B

• C

• D

• E

Which is the best choice for

underlined phrase 9?

A NO CHANGE

B Even though the Art Club will

paint the mural

C Even though the Art Club will

paint the mural;

D Even though the Art Club will

paint the mural—

• A

• B

• C

• D

How could you rewrite sentence 10 using fewer words?

• First, we can ask for student suggestions about items that represent our school, and then let them vote on their favorites.

• First, we can ask for suggestions, and then vote.

• First, we can vote after getting ideas.

• First, we can ask students to give ideas and give suggestions, and the they can vote on the ones that they suggested.